这些小学生写的作文太感动了,直击内心深处,没有经历过磨难,没有设身处地,就写不出这么好的作文。比如,第一篇,我想有个家,爸爸一个家,妈妈一个家,爸爸和妈妈各自家里有全家福,他们全家福里没有我,所以我应该没有家,心醉啊,这就是离婚了小孩可怜无辜。
original:iwhatbusiedoneday,thebodyhatdraggingxhaustionsilentlyonthebalconytosyarablankly,come stealth to ward severing,late wind slow had blow,leftthecooltraceoffilarsilk。但是balconythas也不能bakesunbroilhairisveryhotlyswarpedcool . Dark,
thedamagethatastringofbirdleftinthesky哭泣。这一天的工作也同样令人眼花缭乱。新衣服也变得优雅,
therefivepeopleinmyfamily。他们是我的祖父、祖母、父亲、母亲和我。my father is doctor . heworksinyueqing . hegoestoworkonfootday . my father is not very tall,
heisverykindtohispatientsandheloveshwork。mymotheristeacher . sheworksinamidleschoolin yue Qing . shegoestoworkbycar . sheisaverygoodtecherinmyeyes . iamastud entinYueqingFLS .我的学校非常美丽,到处都是建筑。